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>>8
Well, it's a shot of these two characters in space, being attacked with explosions everywhere, typical stuff~ That's mainly why the weight looks off because of the lack of gravity (although you do have a point, it does still look rather silly in spite of that, so I'll try to fix that up).
Yeah, you're right about those expressions, they do look pretty bland - thanks for the heads up :>

>>9
oh!! okay.

I haven't drawn anything in zero-g, but I'm sure I have some images around here... one has to rely on other factors besides the one expects weight to behave, I suppose, to strengthen the composition in such a setting.

Not that I have any idea what those are or I'd be redlining or something. movement?? I guess could do with stronger flow/line of motion in general? straight lines aren't straight, etc? Gonna page tumors over here at some point

<<10
Righty-o, well I've certainly got a good list of things to fix up now, so at least that gives me some direction of where to go, and that picture is a great reference :3 So thanks a bunch for that!

>>6
Thankyou so much for the polite words - I certainly do hope we can get those up, I think that'd be great! <3 And having this place here gives me somewhere to at least get my training in this world of imageboards :B

with the what??